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This post has been edited by >:): 24 February 2012 - 12:20 AM

[DeathKillington]

At least you're getting better. v3 is definitely the best. First off, this needs a more defined focal. I think the orb-thing is supposed to be the focal, but it's so flat it's hard to tell. There are a few ugly black spots which I don't like. More contrast and interesting effects would help too.

Your smudge technique is noticeably improving, despite flaws in the tag.

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ty dk

[Minus]

I actually like the smudging in this! it looks like you cut an orange in half and then put a microscope up to it! i just think you should make those oranges and yellows more vibrant and it would look swick!