[ASN95(Roseus)]

GIMP 2.6 on a pencil drawing /practice
Large image (sorry)
HEre is the updated version:



original sketch: http://a7.sphotos.ak...109689265_n.jpg
I hope you like


EDIT/: for some readon, I don't think the head matches alot with it

This post has been edited by ASN95(Roseus): 15 January 2012 - 06:12 PM

[Moko]

I think if you would have made it a hard lined image it would look better.
Looking at the sketch I can understand what everything is, in the non hard-lined it's hard to tell.
One thing though either way, the girl's chest should slop down then curve not a straight line then curve.
The toning is nice, but the face looks a little skewed.

Not bad though.

[merrak]

Not bad at all! But I do agree with Moko about the lines. Her pose looks very stiff and unnatural. It took me a while to figure out exactly how she was posed. I think some folds around her torso area (where it twists) would help establish what is happening.

[ASN95(Roseus)]

 Moko, on 15 January 2012 - 12:05 AM, said:

I think if you would have made it a hard lined image it would look better.
Looking at the sketch I can understand what everything is, in the non hard-lined it's hard to tell.
One thing though either way, the girl's chest should slop down then curve not a straight line then curve.
The toning is nice, but the face looks a little skewed.

Not bad though.

Thanks for the tips =] I noticed it after you told me.
I tried updating the lighting with this one: