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This is a doodle I did on the train home from vacations (had my laptop with me). A character from Shrike perhaps, at least she has the facial tattoos.
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[ASN95(Roseus)]

Ahhhh, nice happy mood, hair colors and all I love it alot.
man I wish I had a tablet. scanning sketches cost money here =[

[merrak]

I was expecting to find a picture of a train - but I like it anyway I don't think I could draw anything in a moving vehicle. I have a hard enough time keeping my hand steady without bumps, sways, turbulence, etc.

[Lazukin]

Mouth could use some more depth, but its really good, infinitely better than anything I could do, so props to you.

[Moko]

Lazukin, on 08 January 2012 - 02:38 PM, said:

Mouth could use some more depth, but its really good, infinitely better than anything I could do, so props to you.

^---- Her mouth looks flat...

I like it in a whole though! Must be nice to have a tablet in a train ride. XD

[Griatch]

Thanks for the comments! Yes, it's quite nice to be able to draw away on the train, time flies!

Lazukin, on 08 January 2012 - 02:38 PM, said:

Mouth could use some more depth, but its really good, infinitely better than anything I could do, so props to you.

Moko, on 13 January 2012 - 05:00 AM, said:

Lazukin, on 08 January 2012 - 02:38 PM, said:

Mouth could use some more depth

^---- Her mouth looks flat...

Thanks for the critique! I must admit I don't see this though. There is a tongue between those teeth, and the curvature of the mouth looks fine to me when looking this over. Could either of you maybe elaborate a bit more on what you mean with there lacking depth to the mouth, what do you feel need to improve? Thanks in advance!
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[14Stones]

I doodle poorly drawn stick men, you doodle this. I dont get how even doodles look so good, how long did it take to make this?

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14Stones, on 13 January 2012 - 05:50 PM, said:

I doodle poorly drawn stick men, you doodle this. I dont get how even doodles look so good, how long did it take to make this?

Thanks, the face is actually rather simple, but it's nice to have something to do on the train. Time - the train ride, including stops and changes along the way ... a bunch of hours although I didn't work very effectively.
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[Moko]

What I mean is, I see the details but it looks kinda like a sticker not an actual mouth...Does that make anymore sense? Idk how to explain. lol