[Jack the R]

I'm be making a clean up pass over the first volume. If there's anything you can't stand, or think is wrong, now's the time to speak up.

[Demented]

Nope.

Well, I mean, there are things I don't like, but I'm not going to complain about it. If there's something I don't like, I'll just silently skip that one page.


The story's getting good. Keep at it.

[Jack the R]

Is the title too Batman? I like the awfulness of having these two ideas together, but if it sounds like a Batman reference, I may get rid of it.

I've been looking at the P.O.D. publishers, and it won't be possible to print XTIN through any of them. They're all staying kid safe. Yuck. Since XTIN wouldn't generate enough pre-orders for a regular print run, I suppose it won't be in print any time soon.

Demented - Looks like I'm short on options for printing at this point anyway.

[Griatch]

Nah, not too Batman, I wouldn't have thought of it unless you said so.

Good touch with the "brighter" style and the large-eyed "reborn" Sina in the end.
The start of this comic as a whole didn't make much sense (as I said at the time), but it did improve dramatically towards the end when more dialogue helped to increase the information ratio. The art remained very good throughout.

Sorry to hear about the kid-safe POD principle, strange that they would care for such things - I mean this is certainly for a mature audience, but it's not like it's porn or anything like that.
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Griatch

[Jack the R]

Griatch - I've submitted to Image. I'll find a way to get it printed sooner or later.

[Jack the R]

[Jack the R]

[Jack the R]

Remember when I said the new plan was to do two page updates a week, and paint on Fridays? After reading through the first volume, I'm feeling better about line art. It works o.k. I'd rather have more pages and more story than slow down the update frequency trying to do "fine art." So here's a Tuesday update, thanks for the donations I'm trying to do daily updates this week to get caught up on extra pages. I may not be able to get each page done in a day, but I'm shooting for it.

[Jack the R]

[Jack the R]

[JOhannski]

I actually can't really follow the storyline anymore, but i guess soon it will make more sense
I'm really impressed how many high quality sites of your webcomic you're posting, just amazing. I like that there are like no dialogues at all, when she's falling, makes me feel how she must feel. The Fly in the last panel is just amazing! Brilliant, keep it on!

[Demented]

LIIIIIIVVVVVVE!

[Jack the R]

JOhannski - Where'd the story lose you?

Issue 3 should be raising a few questions - the answers are coming soon.

Demented - !

This post has been edited by Jack the R: 23 October 2011 - 07:39 PM

[Jack the R]

[Griatch]

A bit hard to follow, but overall cool - one wants to see what happens next!
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Griatch

[Jack the R]

[Jack the R]

Griatch - Where's it getting iffy at?

This post has been edited by Jack the R: 26 October 2011 - 05:24 AM

[Wolverine]

I've been following most of the way and I apologise for not commenting but wow, you're doing amazing. The artwork AND storyline
KIU

[Jack the R]

Wolverine - Thanks Wolvie! There are many things I'd like to change, but I guess that's part of it. Overall it's coming out o.k., although maybe I could increase the audience if the story handed things to them easier. The next GN will likely be easier to digest.

[Jack the R]