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Posted 15 March 2012 - 05:39 PM
Not bad, somehow the storytelling doesn't feel as driven to me as in the beginning of the evolution part. Actually I don't know why, I looked at the last two pages once again, and actually they are well narrated, just wanted to mention my first feeling.
Also on the first post on page 8 (in gimptalk) you posted an image that doesn't exist: http://www.smackjeev...d1ab935BMFR.jpg
In the last scene of the last page I think the young musculine adult looks pretty small comparing to the other humans in the picture.
Also on the first post on page 8 (in gimptalk) you posted an image that doesn't exist: http://www.smackjeev...d1ab935BMFR.jpg
In the last scene of the last page I think the young musculine adult looks pretty small comparing to the other humans in the picture.
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Posted 30 March 2012 - 11:48 PM
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Posted 09 April 2012 - 10:01 AM
It's tough to make a webcomic profitable, and XTIN is certainly a bit niche. As you say it's very well done and professional-quality craftmanship though, so I certainly wish you well with bringing it to whichever conclusion you have planned for it!
I would certainly consider chipping out for a print to support a fellow artist.
The cover does look very nice. If you haven't already considered it (don't remember if it was already mentioned in this thread), this is something which I picture would fit well into Heavy Metal magazine (I think they do b&w as well although they tend to focus on coloured works).
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I would certainly consider chipping out for a print to support a fellow artist.
The cover does look very nice. If you haven't already considered it (don't remember if it was already mentioned in this thread), this is something which I picture would fit well into Heavy Metal magazine (I think they do b&w as well although they tend to focus on coloured works).
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