# Gimptalk - Premier Gimp Community: XTIN (NSFW) - Gimptalk - Premier Gimp Community

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### #141Jack the R

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Posted 01 March 2012 - 09:45 AM

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### #142Jack the R

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Posted 09 March 2012 - 08:06 AM

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### #143Jack the R

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Posted 15 March 2012 - 06:13 AM

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### #144JOhannski

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Posted 15 March 2012 - 05:39 PM

Not bad, somehow the storytelling doesn't feel as driven to me as in the beginning of the evolution part. Actually I don't know why, I looked at the last two pages once again, and actually they are well narrated, just wanted to mention my first feeling.

Also on the first post on page 8 (in gimptalk) you posted an image that doesn't exist: http://www.smackjeev...d1ab935BMFR.jpg

In the last scene of the last page I think the young musculine adult looks pretty small comparing to the other humans in the picture.
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Posted 18 March 2012 - 10:15 PM

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Posted 30 March 2012 - 09:17 AM

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### #147satory

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Posted 30 March 2012 - 09:10 PM

Amazing just amazing.
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### #148Jack the R

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Posted 30 March 2012 - 11:48 PM

Thanks!
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### #1492-ton

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Posted 02 April 2012 - 03:02 AM

Beautiful artwork on the new cover!
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### #150Jack the R

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 04:54 AM

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### #151Griatch

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 10:01 AM

It's tough to make a webcomic profitable, and XTIN is certainly a bit niche. As you say it's very well done and professional-quality craftmanship though, so I certainly wish you well with bringing it to whichever conclusion you have planned for it!

I would certainly consider chipping out for a print to support a fellow artist.

The cover does look very nice. If you haven't already considered it (don't remember if it was already mentioned in this thread), this is something which I picture would fit well into Heavy Metal magazine (I think they do b&w as well although they tend to focus on coloured works).
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### #152Jack the R

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 06:20 AM

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