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#1 User is offline   Moko 

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Posted 08 February 2010 - 07:37 PM

I made this for my sig and I wanted to get you take on it :D.

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Posted 08 February 2010 - 09:51 PM

its pretty darn good! maybe do a little something with the text and the background, add a cloudy background to make it look nice, reduce the time between slides maybe for the words.
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Posted 08 February 2010 - 10:06 PM

Thanks for the Comment and Suggestion ^_^.

I'll play with it to make it look fancier, and play with the timing.


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Posted 08 February 2010 - 10:08 PM

Haha, cute. But yeah something to make it a little more snazzy would be good. And it kind of stretches out your sig, and I think it's look a little more professional if you made it smaller. :)
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Posted 08 February 2010 - 10:09 PM

O.K. I'll make it smaller to :D
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Posted 09 February 2010 - 01:59 AM

I updated it :mrgreen:
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Posted 09 February 2010 - 02:50 AM

ahh its much better! its great, for the smaller version, it seems like the text is squished and a bit pixely
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Posted 09 February 2010 - 03:02 AM

Definitely better :D
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Posted 09 February 2010 - 03:26 AM

Thanks!!

I had to re size it and the text died :shock:.

If you click it in my sig it takes you to my Tutorial list. :mrgreen:


Thanks for the advice guys :).



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Posted 09 February 2010 - 04:10 AM

looks great and eye-catching,I like the different backgrounds you chose :D
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Posted 09 February 2010 - 04:48 AM

Thanks ^_^ !!!!



I had fun :) :)


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Posted 09 February 2010 - 04:52 AM

heh looking good :)

You should make it an animation of it filling the text with a cool color or something> :)
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Posted 09 February 2010 - 05:13 AM

Thanks Cyril :).


How would I do that?


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