[>:)]

I really need to get better in sigs. If someone could please give me some tips.
v1:

v2:

[silverycold]

I'd say try to fill up that extra space on the sides, and the border doesnt fit.. to fill up the space, either draw some lines and smudge them, or use a a c4d, maybe a more complicated stock with more going on.. the text is also a bit bland, try making it bigger, add a border to the words and maybe add a bevel to the main words. you could also try motion blurring the words on a copy or a gaussian blur on a copy to make a glowing effect. for a better background, you could also try to make your own starry background by using hsv noise and then adding some glow brushes or star brushes,
good luck!

[>:)]

silverycold said:

I'd say try to fill up that extra space on the sides, and the border doesnt fit.. to fill up the space, either draw some lines and smudge them, or use a a c4d, maybe a more complicated stock with more going on.. the text is also a bit bland, try making it bigger, add a border to the words and maybe add a bevel to the main words. you could also try motion blurring the words on a copy or a gaussian blur on a copy to make a glowing effect. for a better background, you could also try to make your own starry background by using hsv noise and then adding some glow brushes or star brushes,
good luck!

This is all I have to say.
Text. Is. Not. The. Focal. Point.
EDIT: v2 is up.

[silverycold]

i know but its barely visible, *move it to the bottom more if anything.. and version two is better, but it seems like there is a dark line on the right? im not sure if thats just me? in version two you used up the sides more which is good. when i look at it though, the first thing i look at is the white light on the bottom,

[DeathKillington]

First, get rid of that border, it's not doing you any favors. Second, darken up the stuff behind the text, so it's easier to read. It's too late to change now, but it's very rarely a good idea to centralize your focal. Read up on the rule of thirds.

[Halo-Spartan]

Border isn't good, as Killington said.
And the blackness is boring.