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Posted 01 February 2010 - 11:53 PM
Going for depth, ignore the horrid lighting.
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Posted 05 February 2010 - 03:54 AM
Well, you've defiantely accomplished the depth!
I think it'd be a better picture without the shoe and the green thing. They were distracting for my eye.
I think it'd be a better picture without the shoe and the green thing. They were distracting for my eye.
Sorry for any strong critiques, but I like to be critiqued as hard I possible, it's what makes me better, so I try to return the favor, lol.
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Posted 05 February 2010 - 10:58 AM
It's not the most appealing photo but you got great depth with it, which was your aim. Good job.
^^ Cropping fails ^^
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Posted 08 February 2010 - 10:02 AM
Not bad, depth is okay, but that isn't incredibly hard to get with any camera with autofocus. ;p
Try and set up your composition and atmosphere little more - even if it wasn't, this looks a little rushed. I actually like the shoe, it sort of helps set the urban street atmosphere - which you could definitely expand on, instead of a tiled floor and cupboards in the bg. ;p
If possible, get your colours more organized too - or edit them in PS (obviously though, make sure to state that it's an edited photo). You might want the wheel to be a little sharper, if possible. One last, it's kinda hard to tell it's a skateboard. Define that a little better.
Keep it up. (:
Try and set up your composition and atmosphere little more - even if it wasn't, this looks a little rushed. I actually like the shoe, it sort of helps set the urban street atmosphere - which you could definitely expand on, instead of a tiled floor and cupboards in the bg. ;p
If possible, get your colours more organized too - or edit them in PS (obviously though, make sure to state that it's an edited photo). You might want the wheel to be a little sharper, if possible. One last, it's kinda hard to tell it's a skateboard. Define that a little better.
Keep it up. (:
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